Ihave a pet, it is a bird dove, his name is jhoe, his fafourit food is corn.
jhoe have a two eye, two foot, feathers, two wing, and one tail.
the jhoe colour foot is red, and his colour feathers is brown. jhoe it is like fly tall
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BalasHapusYour write is good. But, in paragraph 1, you write "his fafourit food is corn" actually you write "his favorite food is corn". And you write "jhoe have a two eye, two foot, feathers, two wing, and one tail" actually you write "Jhoe have two eyes, two foots, feathers, two wings, and one tail".
Thank you.
Wassalamualaikum Wr. Wb.
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BalasHapusAl, i like your writing, your writing is very good, but how the image your pet.
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BalasHapusyour blog is good
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